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Magnus Blade
17 Feb 2010 - 00:09Irgy
13 Feb 2010 - 00:34...
*goes looking for some more Black Sabbath songs*
Omega Zero
09 Feb 2010 - 03:13OmegaMan
07 Feb 2010 - 04:34Magnus Blade
06 Feb 2010 - 04:07Magnus Blade
05 Feb 2010 - 23:16KEN BLAST
04 Feb 2010 - 21:24Zednanreh
04 Feb 2010 - 01:52Magnus Blade
03 Feb 2010 - 03:56MegaQuint
02 Feb 2010 - 21:24KEN BLAST
02 Feb 2010 - 04:10KEN BLAST
01 Feb 2010 - 02:50...will be more satisfied with your work.
KEN BLAST
01 Feb 2010 - 02:49...your writing style would increase ten-fold. The story isn't bad by any means and if you give that extra push to be able to critique your work you will thank yourself for it in the future. My writing style is far from perfect and nobody's writing will ever be perfect but if you strive to make your writing better you will get better results and you w...
KEN BLAST
01 Feb 2010 - 02:46My second complaint is the grammar and spelling mistakes. I know you warned everyone before you started the story but hear me out. I really like the story so far it's just that the grammar mistakes make me want to skim the story rather then read it if you know what I mean. If you look over your future stories more and correct mistakes in advance...
KEN BLAST
01 Feb 2010 - 02:44"crossed his shoulders" meme you gave the taller blonde character. I think I read that once in one chapter and once again in the next chapter. In my opinion the less you use the same descriptions the better as it helps flesh out the character more.